I walk lightly,
still waking myself up,
it must be the egg shells,
stuck in my feet,
I know,
Im dirty,
despite
these six months clean,
in a dressing room
trying on
my own outfit
differently,
sure, my life could use some change,
this cashier just keeps ignoring me,
my eyes have lost
their flame
funny how I always feel
the same.
wide open,
Hey man I love your poems,
Theyre thought provoking!
I wrote them
for you and the rain,
while I was enjoying
a cigarette,
things you do
when every kite
you ever owned
ended up in a tree.
nice to meet you,
my name is
Broken English
my hobbies are
going the distance,
blowing out candles
and scratching my head
in confusion,
tell me something
I dont know,
unspoken,
emotionally exploding
in the direction
of perplexing non-sense
wrote it down
but lost it.
picking the lint
out of opinions
that probably belong in my pocket,
sitting heavy in my own mistakes.
Leaving finger prints everywhere,
turning myself in.
"Add this to your favourites just
Don't ask me what it means."
my inner child ran away.














Comments
for real.
such amazing rhythm and rawness.
dude keep it up supahfresh ya digggggg
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he said, "i'm gonna get you lost and if you love me you'll come find your way back to me."
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'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
i really like this.
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well worn wings crumble
too tired to forgive
and too battered
to ever forget.
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'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
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'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
let me know if that's at all what you were going for.
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Get it while it's hot! Poetry fresh of the presses! :thumb69775965: Glad to chat poetry or exchange comments anytime
'floored' is another one.
"tell me something
i don't know" -- methylchloroisothiazolinone is an ingredient in most shampoos.
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nothing's gonna change my world...
you're awesome.
thank you.
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'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
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