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I'm that static on a TV,
that just won't turn off;

with a broken heart on my sleeve,
so it hurts to take my shirt off.

tickling my bones as i have no more fat to work off,
I'm worse off than last year so i reflect as i drop ash,
from my cigarette
as i look into it, with a laugh.

stripping father time for every minute he has,
so I'm backing up the data and deleting my past.

my soul is a broken bone in desperate need of a cast.
my heart is beating so fast, i hum a drum and bass tempo.

with voices from up-stairs that keep encouraging me to let go.

I'm standing motionless
on a mound of broken bliss.

dissecting the open sore in my brain called "hopelessness"
the ocean is shaking,

I'm like a sea turtle without a shell,
homeless and naked.


hidden agendas,
lurking over my shoulders like suspenders.
swimming in the pool
until my finger tips are tender.

contenders lining up,
at a feverish pace;
I keep my eyes wide shut with a message written on my face.

as to open up my arms, and let down my guard,
so my moods can swing freely in this great big backyard.

where the children don't stop playing
and peoples actions underline and punctuate what they are saying.

attention is the only thing i can afford to keep paying.
and as my brain keeps decaying i watch the candle flicker.

my voice becomes a whisper
but my thoughts are loud enough to paint a picture.

all in front of you live.

my problems are a lock box
with the answers inside.
:iconoldest-boy:
This is a poem i recorded into [ audio format ]
when i was about 17,
which was roughly 5 years ago.

big shout out,
and thanks to...
:icontheobviouschild:
for featuring me on
[ One Night Stanzas ]

It has a bit of info about myself
and features this poem
in both text, and [ audio format ]

it's my first publication
of any sort, and i'm thrilled.
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:iconluckylisa:
=luckylisa Nov 24, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
i can definately relate and have felt this before
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:iconoldest-boy:
did you listen to the audio version?
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:iconluckylisa:
=luckylisa Nov 24, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
yes, it's very good :)
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:icongarnet-43:
Piognant images flow ever so smoothly.

Most enjoyable.
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:iconoldest-boy:
thank you, so much :)
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:iconcolonelfitz:
With a broken heart on my sleeve, so it hurts to take my shirt off.
I like that line. :)

I actually downloaded all 4 of your tracks a while back, I guess I just never said anything. ^^;
It's really interesting listening to spoken word poetry, well, spoken.
I have to admit I haven't listened to very much hip-hop (my experience is pretty much limited to your four tracks and an immortal technique album), but if it's all this full of...art, I could acquire a taste for it. :nod:
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:iconwellwornwings:
Stripping father time for every minute he has.
So I'm backing up the data and deleting my past.



excellent.
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