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affection drive by ~oldest-boy:iconoldest-boy:

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If I recycled
the love littered at your feet
                hearts would starve no more.
©2008-2009 ~oldest-boy
:iconoldest-boy:

Author's Comments

affection drive; stop love hunger.

thanks to *xxLadyBugxx for suggesting it,
and to ^LadyLincoln for featuring it.

Daily Deviation

Given 2008-10-30

affection drive by ~oldest-boy is a creative poem that has a very clever twist. (Suggested by *xxLadyBugxx and Featured by ^LadyLincoln)

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~formaniac Oct 18, 2008, 9:52:58 AM
I'd take recycled love :)
Great poem.

--
I had the blues because I had no shoes until upon the street, I met a man who had no feet.
~Ancient Persian Saying
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~oldest-boy Oct 18, 2008, 9:57:33 AM
thank you!

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'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
:icontheobviouschild:
=TheObviousChild Oct 18, 2008, 11:39:56 AM
You've been writing haiku for a matter of... what, days?! This is freaking awesome.

I really hope you're going to carry on sending your work out to magazines/ getting it published. You're a star waiting to happen.

:heart:

PS: I put your interview up just now on ONS!

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Blog: One Night Stanzas
Magazine: Read This Magazine
Store: Read This, Etsy!
:iconmissyouquiteterribly:
~MissYouQuiteTerribly Oct 18, 2008, 2:48:05 PM
Short and sweet :)
This is wonderful!

--
I'm sick and I'm twisted
I'm broken you can't fix it
Don't make me, cause I'll do it!
Red button and we'll all go
:iconr-mitchell:
~r-mitchell Oct 18, 2008, 3:19:36 PM
"love littered at your feet"
great image. this is beautiful.
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*Garnet-43 Oct 18, 2008, 3:25:00 PM
What an image!

Three lines speak volumes.

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"And the day came when the risk to remain tight in a bud was more painful than the risk it took to blossom." - Anais Nin
:iconoldest-boy:
~oldest-boy Oct 18, 2008, 3:32:22 PM
thanks :D

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'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
:iconoldest-boy:
~oldest-boy Oct 18, 2008, 3:32:55 PM
woohoo :O

you're too good to me.

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'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
:iconoldest-boy:
~oldest-boy Oct 18, 2008, 3:33:12 PM
thank you, kind sir.

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'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
:iconoldest-boy:
~oldest-boy Oct 18, 2008, 3:33:24 PM
thank you, very much.

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'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
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