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43rd chorus

cummings,
I see it now, my man,
I see it;

the beauty behind dis
order dis
array dis away
dat
      away

there's always (this place!)
and

th
is
pl
ac
e!

this finely tuned (electric rise
of a begging body's frail-
fuzz to rising epiphany)
weaponry
         aimed from.tattoos.to.crayons.at.the.heart

you've chiseled away
their gods their coffin-walls their fixed form attire their machines

they're machines
but-you-and-now-
me;
(here!)
to show them

(my)them.
sometimes I just breath his air.
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zoeil Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2009   Photographer
yes. :heart: :+fav:
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oldest-boy Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2010
thank you.
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verilyartwork Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009
i think i just love you now
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:iconoldest-boy:
oldest-boy Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
word? word.
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:icontorturedremembrance:
TorturedRemembrance Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2009
I could kick myself for not taking the time to read your latest sooner, because this is just so great. :heart:
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oldest-boy Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2009
don't stress it.
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:iconshadowedacolyte:
ShadowedAcolyte Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009
A cheerful paean. Thanks.
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:iconoldest-boy:
oldest-boy Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2009
oh boy.
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:icontwistedalyx:
TwistedAlyx Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
the beauty behind dis
order dis
array dis away
dat
away

weaponry
aimed [link].heart

you've chiseled away
their gods their coffin-walls their fixed form attire their machines
Reply
:iconoldest-boy:
oldest-boy Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2009
yamang.
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