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glittery lime green by ~oldest-boy:iconoldest-boy:



I've sent my voice
as far into you
as you've let it go
perhaps further
than you know,

but the point is that I have sent it,


     you are some kind of
     glittery lime green
     and haven't figured out
     what color I am yet,

     but relationships are
     more like abstract art
     and everyone has
     several (true) colors,

I'm sure we will blend as much as we contrast,


you see in me
the things I try
to understand
to shape what's
left of my ego,

          the things I can
          only hope
          are not delusions
         
          but would be
     no less grateful
if they were,

as long as they're the ones that last lifespans,


     every time you fall
     into my hole in the world;

a television factory
goes out of business,

     the clouds slow
     their roll over the sky
     as if fascinated
     like commuters
     trying to catch
     a glimpse
     at a car crash,

and a child
writes his first
love poem
©2009 ~oldest-boy
:iconoldest-boy:

Author's Comments

Arizona here she comes?

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:iconxxantixdepressantsxx:
this is beautiful.

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~~Xtine
<3
:iconoldest-boy:
thank you.,
I hope it lured you
into checking out
my other work.

--
'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
:iconwh0rem0ans:
shades of coral that hide turquoise with surprising lime green glittery bits?

this beautiful.
first beautiful.

--
Let the beauty of what you love be what you do. There are a thousand ways to kneel and kiss the earth. (Rumi)
:iconwrite-it-out:
Just had to say
I really admire your writing.

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BAM. fear me.
:iconamertie:
this was beautiful.
and i loved reading it.
:heart:
:icontheobviouschild:
"every time you fall
into my hole in the world;

a television factory
goes out of business,


the clouds slow
their roll over the sky
as if fascinated
like commuters
trying to catch
a glimpse
at a car crash,

and a child
writes his first
love poem"


:heart: :heart: :heart:

--
Blog: One Night Stanzas
Magazine: Read This Magazine
Store: Read This, Etsy!
:iconrunfromthelight:
Sweet and fragile.
Love it.

--
:bug:[link]

Some girls wander by mistake.
:iconnoite-bela:
I like this, especially as my most recent letter (sent out today) is in lime green. n=n

--
~Where art thou, Muse, that thou forget'st so long
O truant Muse, what shall be thy amends~ 'Robert Shakespeare'

:TheAssociation:
:icongarnet-43:
"and everyone has
several (true) colors,"


Insightful thought.

Creative of you to add a little glitter.

--
"And the day came when the risk to remain tight in a bud was more painful than the risk it took to blossom." - Anais Nin
:iconbisoubaby:
i think i'll go fingerpaint a love note now.

--
i write it and i teach it, i poet and i preach it.

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