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woke up,
     feeling like even God would hit snooze,
     and wait for prayers
     to remind him of life,
     in flashes,
     that interupt the flooding of reason

blazing on a section of the sun,
that wants nothing more
than to burn us all alive,
but settles for providing a sunny day
to the dirty waters that encase a paradise,
I only wish was a state of mind
    that I could cross into,
         and gaze out from,
              passing looks of...

     know it all and,
     know it best

the likes of which couldn't have survived 1985,
I'm sure

rightfully so,
to save themselves from
resting unnaturally above the 'bubbling lips'

     that will make the same
     rewarding mistakes
     as I have,
     answered by the same questions,

     I only hope I don't die with.
          
©2008-2009 ~oldest-boy
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Author's Comments

[ bubbling lips: individuals playing guitar hero that can't tell 'Obama & Biden' from 'Osama Bin Laden' ]

[ the only way to end a poem like this...
is to become suddenly quiet. ]

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:iconladyknight17:
Good work again. I really liked the beginning, but the end was very fitting.

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:iconoldest-boy:
thank you.

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'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
:iconladyknight17:
Your welcome.

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:icontorturedremembrance:
Awesome. :D The Authors comments were just as amazing as well. :D

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Say something; anything.
:iconyouinventedme:
perfect close


xo!

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an antique arms and armor expert
:icongarnet-43:
1985....:confused:...The year you were born?

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"And the day came when the risk to remain tight in a bud was more painful than the risk it took to blossom." - Anais Nin
:iconoldest-boy:
yes :P

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'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
:iconoldest-boy:
thank you, kindly, sir.

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'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
:iconoldest-boy:
thank you, darling.

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'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.

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