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scratch and sniff... by ~oldest-boy:iconoldest-boy:



consider this
a hole in your theory
and my condom/
consciousness
conundrum
shifts

our gift-
wrapped
(in you)
and all
that
(you do)
strewn about
in strands
too soon
to stray

a time-
less
blueprint
for short shrift
exits and
cut-snip-
slap-cry
future interplay-
place

life's birthed
and over-
rehearsed
we'll see who
laughs last
and bursts
first
©2009 ~oldest-boy
:iconoldest-boy:

Author's Comments

This is a collaboration with the talented mr.
:iconyouinventedme:

(please) check out his gallery!

also, here is the alternate version.

scratch and sniff (finger) paint.

I will not be
the end of my
blood-
line
(set aside)
trickle down
genetics featuring
double helix
split

consider this
a hole-in-your-
theory
and my
condom/
consciousness
conundrum
shifts

our gift-
wrapped
(in you)
and all
that
(you do)
strewn about
in strands
too soon
to stray

a time-
less
blueprint
for short shrift
exits and
cut-snip-
slap-cry
future interplay

life's birthed
rehearsed
your code is
a curse
we'll see who
laughs last
and bursts
first

Comments


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:iconnoite-bela:
Oooh

--
~Where art thou, Muse, that thou forget'st so long
O truant Muse, what shall be thy amends~ 'Robert Shakespeare'

:TheAssociation:
:iconavolatilecalm:
Love the word play in this one, actually

--
Positive Affirmation
(Keep Breathin)


__


**Inanely Inspired Insanity ~3EyesClub**
:iconoldest-boy:
good.

--
'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
:icongetyourgrip:
amazing!!!!
the last stanza is my favourite,
but it is all brilliant.

--
Married to the pen,
and we're both having an affair
with the page.
:iconxxdominoe:
personally I like the version with the extra first stanza... its a very powerful addition
:iconoldest-boy:
that's the original version.

mine is the ass-hole edit.

--
'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
:iconoldest-boy:
word.

--
'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
:iconxxdominoe:
awwwww thats okay =]
:iconpencilfold:
You two are geniuses.
:iconbisoubaby:
this is stellar
to read
out
loud.

--
i write it and i teach it, i poet and i preach it.

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