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taco bell bags
and half drunken
gatorade bottles

pad the floor
and occasionally
prevent me
from breaking in time

while the sun
is delighting in the burst
     of cracks
that decorate the windshield
like some sort of
            satanic snowflake
that glows
ever led-
             light chasing
its face
            to fire

the aged iris
of this still-
seeing
      gunmetal
vessel

a thousand copper gods
retired to the mire
of soda-cup-
sweat
spitting echoes
in a slur
     of the prayers
we never did send

to the sky.
...
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:iconpseudometry:
pseudometry Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009   Writer
Some of the best, most vivid description I've read in a while. Really brings the scene alive, a delight to read.
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oldest-boy Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
thanks as always....

P.S.

my chapbook is available online for 6 buckeroos.
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:iconpseudometry:
pseudometry Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2009   Writer
Yeah I saw, sweet deal
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:iconoldest-boy:
oldest-boy Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009
thanks
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JaiGuruDeVat Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2009
i will never get my license with all these distractions.
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:iconoldest-boy:
oldest-boy Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
hshs


(haha)
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:iconjaigurudevat:
JaiGuruDeVat Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009
shh.

( >>ha )
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moondrunk Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009   Writer
you've just described my thursdays
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:iconoldest-boy:
oldest-boy Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
word.
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Piscesandthediamonds Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
love that bit that Shane pointed out :heart: i enjoy your projections and interpretations of the world :hug:
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